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Re: L'angelo De Parma: Vampyre
Hey there! I'm Angel of Death but you can call me Angel, and I shall be your reviewer today. This is quite a lengthy piece, so I might not be ...
May 3, 2009 -
Re: Metamorphosis-Chapter 1.2
Note: I'm not sure about this second half of chapter 1. I feel that there can be more descriptions but I'm not sure where to put them. I think it's ...
May 2, 2009 -
Re: The Defenestration of Prague #4
Hey Cal, Dylan spent a longer time than usual in the shower, letting the extra hot-hot water beat out the kinks and knots born of her recent frustrations . I ...
May 2, 2009 -
Re: Hannah's NaPoWriMo Thread; Beyond Silken Birds
These poems have the breath of a million souls. You are one of the best poets on this site. Everything is so yummy and scrumptious and beautiful and wonderful and ...
May 1, 2009 -
Re: How Far Did You Get?
Congrats to all! This really has been a fun 30 days. It was way better than NaNo for it not as stressful. I wrote 30 poems! I am very fond ...
May 1, 2009 -
Re: the taste of forbidden fruit: Angel's NaPoWriMo Thread
April 30 Paramour a vision of lipstick and perfume, sweetly kissed by a hint of secrecy, he tentatively holds her hand across the table, his wedding band smiling at him ...
May 1, 2009 -
Re: the taste of forbidden fruit: Angel's NaPoWriMo Thread
April 29 wake me up when september ends the thunderous dirge plays a sweet sweet melody to my demise. my heart is beating and roaring and rumbling, starting a war ...
Apr 29, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Fifteen
Hey Ash! I'm sorry for not reading this a long time ago. I haven't been getting on as often as I used to but, I've finally read it and it ...
Apr 29, 2009 -
Re: Metamorphosis
sparkle8744 Wow! It's amazing that I didn't have any grammatical errors because I'm not that really good at grammar but I guess I am. So thanks for pointing that out. ...
Apr 29, 2009 -
Re: NaPoWriMo + Chat + Songs from the 90s =
You and this rap is made of win. This definitely needs to become Yewis's theme song. ~Angel
Apr 29, 2009 -
Re: Ashes, Ashes
Sunny- I am at a lost for words. This was beautiful. I loved every moment of it and I was drawn in from the beginning and I couldn't stop reading ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: The Defenestration of Prague #3
Hey Cal! I can't believe nobody has reviewed this yet but I'm here now! When Dylan pulled into the driveway, she told Marshall to wait, and that she would help ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: the taste of forbidden fruit: Angel's NaPoWriMo Thread
I think this is one of my worst poems yet, if not gruesome. I have noticed that lately my work has been taking on this dark form and that freaks ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: the taste of forbidden fruit: Angel's NaPoWriMo Thread
April 19 roses et violettes perfume and sex kiss the air, leaving the room breathless, and as moans cry out against the painful darkness, a shillings worth of pleasure is ...
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Re: memories of a broken heart edited
Hey there! I don't think we've met but I'm Angel of Death. Please, call me Angel, though. Okay, I quite liked this but I think it needs a lot of ...
Apr 26, 2009
